After getting some further feedback, it was the text that needed to be worked on the text wasn't working with the overall concept. So i went away and played with some different fonts. I felt like the cleaner the font the more well suited it was to the idea.
Initial text: The first font was alright but wasnt really suitable or bold enough for the main tagline. so i looked at another font which i actually quite liked as it gave me the whole technology robot feel, so i thought i related quite well to the theme, but as i kept looking into font i decided that, this font wasnt quite right. When it came to positioning of the text, the text on two lines was working better than the tagline across 1 line.



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